Query Letter and Sample Pages Critique Special

In an effort to help out a friend with a vet bill, I’m offering my Query Package Special, which includes a critique of a query letter and first 10,000 words for $50.

The query feedback will come in the form of in-document edit suggestions and feedback inserted as comments using track changes, and the manuscript critique will come in the form of an editorial letter.

You can add your synopsis for an additional $20. Like the query, the synopsis feedback will come in the form of in-document edits and comments.

For an additional $25, you can opt for my combination developmental and line edit of your opening pages, which includes in-document edits and comments in the manuscript itself, with a focus on big picture issues (character, plot, pacing, etc.) as well as flow, voice, and readability. This has proven to be the most effective option for writers looking to increase their rates of full manuscript requests.

For full manuscript critiques and developmental edits, I am currently booking for August.

Use the form below if you’d like to book a query package and receive this discount. Thanks for helping out!

Tory

One thought on “Query Letter and Sample Pages Critique Special

  1. I’m so pleased that you offered this service and and at this time though I am not fully complete yet but I’m continue to work to get towards that goal. Thank you for your wonderful information and details to what you do.

    Thank you

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