Query and Manuscript Critiques

I HAVE now partnered with author WB Welch to provide a more comprehensive approach to your critique. Book with us and you’ll get two readers for your manuscript at less than the typical price of one.

Here is what we can offer you, along with what it’ll cost. If you want us, go to the Contact page and send us a message. We’ll likely respond the same day.


Paste your query into the form on the Contact page and let me know how many times it’s gone out, how many rejections, any full MS requests, etc. I’ll critique it for free and if you’re happy you can tip me via PayPal or Amazon gift card and/or give our services a shoutout on Twitter by sharing the pinned tweet and telling people about the quality of our work.


Editorial Letter OR Proofread:

First 5K words = $50

Full manuscript = $6 per 1000 words

Editorial Letter AND Proofread:

First 5K words = $80

Full manuscript = $10 per 1000 words


Editorial letter: a comprehensive letter that discusses your book top to bottom, including plot, character development, structure, pacing, action, scene-setting, conflict and resolution, story arc, weak areas, strengths, genre placement, market placement, target audience, and an overall reader’s review to express the book’s power and impact. I will also identify inconsistencies, plot holes, weak moments, clutter, confusing dialogue, and those beautiful moments that leave me awestruck.

Proofread: a full copy edit of your manuscript using track changes for you to conveniently accept or reject. This will focus on typos, grammar, poor wording, awkward sentences, word choice, and more to provide a more polished version of your work.

INTERESTED? Contact me here.

If you’re unsure about hiring me, test my skills for free by dropping your query letter in my inbox (you can just paste your query into the comment section of my contact form). There’s no risk. For queries, you only pay me if you feel like it.

Also, if you purchase a 5K critique and then want to move forward for a full manuscript critique, the price you paid for the partial will be deducted from the cost of the full.

Hit me up. Trust me.

With love,


4 thoughts on “Query and Manuscript Critiques

  1. Editorial letter only. I’m a word gal, BAD at math, so please confirm: for a 116,386-word manuscript, we’re talking $464.00, right? If so, yes please! (If not, please state proper amount.) Thanks!


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